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snow in my soul

509 / 0 / 13 лет
Я английским владею не то чтобы очень хорошо, но вот попробовал написать песню. По большому счету, она не очень сильная текстом (Рождество и Любовь), но, может, кто оценит.
Один умный малой нашел одну ошибку в грамматике, но мне насрать

Snow in my soul

Wild and prickly words goes from your book,
Wonder flame runs around beauty Christmas tree.
I am wearing fur boots and red hoock,
Nice girl smiled to somebody, I think, not to me

Sleeping in the bedroom,
Waiting for the new dreams,
You don't think about snow in my soul.
Winter's yellow bright moon,
Laughs, winces and gives
Strangest shadows on the scratchy broad floor.

Tracks of ice moves on my window pane.
Crazy snowstorm, fun on eyes, cosiness in room,
I've sent you the letter with my pain,
I'm glad, because this girl flower in bloom

Sleeping in the bedroom,
Waiting for the new dreams,
You don't think about snow in my soul.
Winter's yellow bright moon,
Laughs, winces and gives
Strangest shadows on the broad raspy floor....